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Through the good and the bad
you were always happy, never sad

Through each day you'd smile and laugh
brightening the life of all in your path

But when you died and the world grew cold
I heard you whisper from Death's dark hold

"Just keep smiling, if only for me"
"If nothing else, cause then you'll see"

"The world around you is always in need"
"but give it a smile and it will be freed"

"Freed from the chains that bind it down"
"Freed from the hate that makes us all frown"

"Freed from the sorrow that darkens your day"
"so that our friendship can wash it away"

"Even now, when you feel down"
"and the world makes you frown"

"I'll be here, right with you"
"to make your smile shine like new"

That's what I heard and it rang in my head
as i raced to your house to find you dead

As I sat with you, crying in pain
Some of my tears, they fell on your mane

And as they touched, what did I see
I saw you get up and smile at me

You told me to smile, if only for you
And the reason why I already knew

The world around me was still in need
But I gave it a smile and it was freed

Freed from the chains that bound it down
and all the things that made us frown

Freed from the sorrow that darkened my day
So that our friendship can wash it away

Even now, as you continue to fade
I still know, in my heart you stayed

I may not hear you, touch you or see
But still I know, your right next to me

And from today, till the day I die
You'll always be here, my Pinkie Pie...
I came up with this piece when i saw;
"Never Stop Smiling" [link]

The piece inspired me to write this poem as a dialog for Rainbow Dash

I cried a little while writing this, but my tears couldn't dull the sharp words of this poem, sinking deep into my heart...
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XKitchenPrincessX Sep 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist

lets see if I can read this without crying.............fail :c

 

I think this is really amazing I really love all your poems! ^^

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TemporalTwins Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
That means alot to me
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PurpleRoselyn Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Mind if I read this poem as rainbow dash in a youtube video? I'll credit you! :)
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TemporalTwins Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sure, I don't mind.
Just make sure you get permission to post the image as well
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:iconpinkamenadianepielol:
;') u did a great job! *BROHOOF*
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TemporalTwins Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
/)(\
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:iconpinkamenadianepielol:
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooo pinkie is my fav nooooooooooooooo she is dead noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo(1 week)oooooooooooooooooooooooo
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TemporalTwins Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconderpyspazplz::iconsays3plz:SAY WHAAAAAAT?

:iconangryderpyplz::iconsays3plz:Don't you DARE say something like that about Pinkie!!!!! Especially with RD right next to you!!!!!!!

**you look to your right**

:iconstyle1plz::iconstyle2plz::iconstyle3plz::iconstyle4plz::iconsays3plz:I don't want to miss anything about her.......
:iconnoneplz::iconhaloplz:
:iconangelwingleftplz::iconpinkiepieplz::iconangelwingrightplz::iconsays3plz:And you won't have to Dashy, cause I'll always be here, right with you, to make your smile shine like new!

:iconpartycannonplz::iconsays3plz: Now lets throw a "Giggle at my ghosty" party
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TemporalTwins Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You think so?
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