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Through the good and the bad
you were always happy, never sad

Through each day you'd smile and laugh
brightening the life of all in your path

But when you died and the world grew cold
I heard you whisper from Death's dark hold

"Just keep smiling, if only for me"
"If nothing else, cause then you'll see"

"The world around you is always in need"
"but give it a smile and it will be freed"

"Freed from the chains that bind it down"
"Freed from the hate that makes us all frown"

"Freed from the sorrow that darkens your day"
"so that our friendship can wash it away"

"Even now, when you feel down"
"and the world makes you frown"

"I'll be here, right with you"
"to make your smile shine like new"

That's what I heard and it rang in my head
as i raced to your house to find you dead

As I sat with you, crying in pain
Some of my tears, they fell on your mane

And as they touched, what did I see
I saw you get up and smile at me

You told me to smile, if only for you
And the reason why I already knew

The world around me was still in need
But I gave it a smile and it was freed

Freed from the chains that bound it down
and all the things that made us frown

Freed from the sorrow that darkened my day
So that our friendship can wash it away

Even now, as you continue to fade
I still know, in my heart you stayed

I may not hear you, touch you or see
But still I know, your right next to me

And from today, till the day I die
You'll always be here, my Pinkie Pie...
I came up with this piece when i saw;
"Never Stop Smiling" [link]

The piece inspired me to write this poem as a dialog for Rainbow Dash

I cried a little while writing this, but my tears couldn't dull the sharp words of this poem, sinking deep into my heart...
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mowmow7 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  New member Student General Artist
i was trying to cry while reading this i almost did but i was watching pewdiepiew XD amazing work tho!!!!!!!!
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mowmow7 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  New member Student General Artist
oh... that rymed diddnt it? oops XD
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centaury2 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
a lie i will not tell,
tears this poem did fell.

silent i was in the end
delayed reaction before it set in
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TemporalTwins Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad to liked it so much and it managed to impact you emotionally.
Though, I'm sorry it made you sad...
Although it was the intention, I still feel kind of bad.
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centaury2 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
haha- if anything i would personally put you in a league similar to silly filly studios. but that is just my opinion. their works have also made such an impact. 
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TemporalTwins Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, that means a lot to me
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centaury2 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
^.^
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PrincessLuna2424 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Student Artist
It's so sad!! I love it! (sorry if that sounded weird, usually things that make me sad are my favorite things).
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TemporalTwins Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It's not weird.
I know quite a few others who are the same way.
I'm glad you like it so much!
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PrincessLuna2424 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Student Artist
:) (Smile) 
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